Subside and Cease

Subside and Cease

A Poem by Melobldnfr
"

Speaks for itself.

"

03/15/12

 

I worry for your soul;

The way you hear things,

See things, say things,

Your apparent feelings of unworthiness.

It may all come honestly and understandably,

But you are not unworthy.

Yet it effects you,

And thereby those around you,

In the ways you feel control,

Or out of control;

Act and react.

This is not a down,

And I am not without compassion

Or love,

This is just what I see.

It's not about right or wrong,

But oh how much easier, nicer,

More peaceful things would be for us,

Between us,

If this could subside and cease.

© 2012 Melobldnfr


Author's Note

Melobldnfr
Update: Artist, Becca Cox. Thanks Neva!

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The title drew me to this poem, but the whole thing is great...nice flow and pure emotion^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Love what you said here! awesome stuff :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:) Your artist is Becca Cox....Yes, this does speak for itself and it speaks loudly. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on March 17, 2012
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Tags: new age, contemporary, reflection, retrospection, self, love, introspection, dreams, romance, relationships, life, struggle, imagery

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Melobldnfr
Melobldnfr

Wichita, KS



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