Crush (Complete)

This one has a few more lines that didn't get added on the first one.

**Crush**

I know its a little cliche

To write a poem for a girl

But first, just see it my way

Come on, just give it a whirl

I've cared and loved and shared her weight

Made sure her shoulders’ll never unfurl

I became a steadfast presence for her

I became a shoulder on which to cry

Whenever her heart got damaged

Always there to be her closest ally

Always close by with a nice warm bandage

Always there with a reason to stop by

Always ready, one command, im Savage

Nothing stopping me from going samurai

She is nothing short of the full Package

Intelligent, funny, beautiful enough to electrify

With a smile, I help carry her Baggage

Always there, with her i will stand by

But, only if i can manage

That Question “Will you be mine?”

Author's Note

Any edits and comments are appreciated.

Reviews

[KokoaKatt]

Awww this is super sweet! Honestly, if you and her are close friends, you should have her read this poem. I guess that also depends on if she knows you write to begin with. But really, don't go too long without letting her know how you feel. You never know what the future may hold. Haha, I say go for it! From a writing perspective, its very cute; loving and caring for someone is a beautiful thing. Your rhymes are good and I like that you but your quirkiness of "savage" and "samurai" in there. Your poems never fail to make me smile or just blow me away. You're doing a great job! Never stop writing.

[Mercer]

It's been 3 years, of being best friends, we have always been close, and i plan on asking whenever i next get the chance.

[KokoaKatt]

Aww that is so cute! Well good luck! I'm rooting for you :)