It's Not Mutual

It's Not Mutual

A Poem by Rexile

When I first saw you,
I don't mind about you.
You were just a stranger to me,
That passes in front of me.

But at the time that I had known your story,
I realize that you are lovely
I can't take my eyes on you,
Cause I'm starting to fall in love with you.

Even though I am the only one who feel this way,
I don't care, because the feeling is very much okay.
I would still continue on loving you,
Even if you don't love me, the way I do

© 2018 Rexile


Author's Note

Rexile
Sorry for the wrong grammar.. Newbie here! :-)

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This is great art especially for a newbie. I can tell that you are expressing your true emotions through this piece. My suggestion to you would be to keep writing and innovating your art to make it work that you can be proud of.
Spelling errors on lines 7 and 9. Idk how new you are but there's a function on this website that allows you to edit.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rexile

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and for your suggestions... It will help me a lot.



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This is great art especially for a newbie. I can tell that you are expressing your true emotions through this piece. My suggestion to you would be to keep writing and innovating your art to make it work that you can be proud of.
Spelling errors on lines 7 and 9. Idk how new you are but there's a function on this website that allows you to edit.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rexile

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and for your suggestions... It will help me a lot.

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Added on May 9, 2018
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Rexile
Rexile

Bacolod city, 6, Philippines



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I just wanted to share my poems that I created whenever I wanted to express my feelings. Thanks for reading! :-) more..

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