Her Unknown World

Her Unknown World

A Poem by Bobbi
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Her unkown world......

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As the world surrounds her soul,
No-one actually knows how she feels.
The closer she gets to you, she pulls away.
As the waves crash upon the ocean. Her tears are like diamonds.
You can feel rich by her touch, and poor by her sadness.
Her words not only make sense to me, but as she speaks her speech with perfection.
I don't know the way to help her heal, only to help her save herself from fear of life for a day. What she fears the most is what life can bring her and what it can change. As I guard and watch her and only a whisper of knowledge can seek the way to happiness.
What silence does to us......

© 2010 Bobbi


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Love this!! Incredibly true, fearing change is a crippling fear

Posted 7 Years Ago


It's such a shame that some people cannot
share their feelings for fear of change.
Sadness surrounds those who choose to
live in a small locked box. Nicely done...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Bobbi
Bobbi

Oakland, CA



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A Poem by Bobbi