Trembled Words

The trembled words of change
are pronounced within my heart.
I aspire to begin again the
valued chores I once put aside.
Resistance to indifference is not welcomed
Nay, we must aspire to the new tone
of liberalized concern.
Create a space of solitude
within the yawning cascades
of tremored phases to survive.

We met in a dark doorway,
my me and I.
There I discovered my limitations
which were controlled
by my possibilities.

This new phase of my daze
will begin with honour.
And with a joy that I meet
the strangeness of these patterns
indicating I have arrived,
but where am I going?

Reviews

[Sarah]

really good

[Thea]

Brilliant work! I like the powerful ending of this piece...Very well penned!
:)))

[Tai Ryens]

I loved the way you ended it! Very haunting, but not in the "I'm gonna get you" kind of way, more of a thought that you brought into my mind and slamming the breaks with no idea of where you are going in life. This poem has an amazing flow.
That second stanza was beautifully penned. I love how you portray a single person meeting with his mentality and discovering who he truly is.
Beautiful poem. Keep it up!

[Cassie Fraga]

AMAZING!!! makes me wanna get in the car slam on the gas and jus go where eva the road takes me!!! thank you for sharing!! def. going into my fave pile!! = )

[~ Stefanie ~]

I really like how you wrote this. Such powerful words expressed in this piece. Well done!

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Wonderfully written

[Coyote Poetry]

Last line is true. Sometime we need change and direction. But where are we going and what will we accomplish? Strong ending in this excellent poem.
Coyote