Inconsistencies

Paradox exists in all, and it was begging too much to ignore...

And stifled voices proclaim lucidity,
But never have they been so wrong...
How could they not see my flaws,
As glaring, blatant, as they are?
Why do you believe my feelings,
When there are none that remain?
What keeps your belief unchanging?
What could ever be so strong?
Smite me down; as gods did titans,
Spare me not what i deserve...
And let oracle-sight of this future
Show the greyness of my heart...
Logic, speed her from my presence,
Let her not become entwined...
But, she says it is too late...

Reviews

[Angela]

Lovely! Sometimes we just don't see our own self worth. If this one is from the heart, Listen to her! Well crafted.

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

another wonderful poem, bravo (:

[ShelbyReadings]

I really like this poem, it's flows very smoothly and the language you use is beautiful.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

love your stlye

[Skoo.]

Wow, this is amazing (:
I feel privileged to have someone who can write this brilliantly telling me they like my poetry (':
I love how powerful this poem is, it contains such emotion yet it's so calm...
Great write, keep them coming (: