Singularity

sometimes all you need is a moment

Scattered shafts of light breaking through the morning grey

 

Cooling breeze finds me pleased

 

Wisps of steam from my coffee drift

 

Cicadas welcoming the day

 

Quiet of the morn broken only by songbirds

 

The smell of breakfast wafting from the window

 

The day soon to start, with its distractions and chores

 

But for this moment, this one singularity

 

Blissful, contented peace

Author's Note

a june morning when all went right

Reviews

[Michael of Gilead]

Thank you very much Selene, your always welcome to stop in for a cup ;)

[Michael of Gilead]

Well thank you Ouciano

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

mmm~ the nectar drop in the center of the lotus~ blissfully beautiful writing~I can scent the aroma of the coffe beans~ yum~

[OR]

I always enjoy your writings
"BRAVO !"

[Michael of Gilead]

I guess I have been, you b*****d

Was looking through some old un-finished stuff and next thing i know...bazinga!

[Brad]

well, haven't you been a writey b*****d this weekend?

excellent capture, man, i could smell the bacon wafting through that window, the warmth of the coffee sliding down the throat and the play of the critters in the yard before the day begins and the humans take over their playground

[Michael of Gilead]

Hey Robin, thanks...a new deck opened new vistas

[Robin]

a perfect moment expressed perfectly ~

[Michael of Gilead]

Thanks Alicia, yes you are right my punctuation skills are lacking for sure :)

[Alicia™]

Such a wonderful poem! The words were tactfully chosen, and definitely convey a simple heaven… I liked the concept of singularity too.

One thing that I'd have preferred would have been if you'd put punctuation at the end of some lines, though...