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blaze

A Poem by Michael of Gilead
"

the time of the year

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Slanted sunlight of muddled gold

Shines through my window

 

Brown, yellow and reddish marks of a

summer gone, wind smeared across the russet grass

 

Smell of dust mixed in the breeze

Charcoal with the scent of rain

 

Crimson sunsets, crystalline moonshine

Ground crinkles under my feet

 

Old Oaks rain acorns

As cold settles deep

© 2011 Michael of Gilead


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you have invited every sense into this poetic wordscape ! well done Michael

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thanks Poetic :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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this is the best poem I have read about the changing of the seasons..you make it almost tangible..super descriptive phrases..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you for your review Storiestotell

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you very much Sunni

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thanks Cheng

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you Watash

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful imagery that painted an awesome picture! Words that made fall come alive, breathtaking!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Why thanks Poppy and glad this eases your soul :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


So beautiful love, this time of year is described here so wonderfully, it literally eases my soul today!
xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 20, 2011
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