Lies hide beneath the eyes

After a tragedy.That happens to Evlana, Dan sets himself on a mission to kill the person who acted on his fatel actions. On trying to get revenge will the lose the love they shared. Will she find out?

I'm sorry Evlana

Danny, you have to fight anymore she saud softly keeping his face firmly in her hands.

Eve, I have to.

Danny! Just stop it she cried with tears beginning to run down her face. He was like a solider in a pointless war. Working towards a goal that none existant, it's none existant but they just keep believing.

 

She knew full well what he getting into. They weren't together when it happened. She still thinks Daniel is just with her becuase he wants to protect her. The love she gave to him was so true, that she knew in her heart what he was doing was the complete opposite to what she wanted. Although she felt she had a duty, not to let him  go, not to let him fight.

 

6 months earlier. . .

                               It's was pitch as i came out of the house, no one seems to be out. The icy wind made me shutter as i lifted the cigarette to my mouth. I began to walk home ounce it was lit. I was half way home when it happened, it was only a short walk. . . They came out of no where i didn't even hear them walk towards me. The cigarette dropped out of my mouth, the person who appeared to be the ring leader stepped closer stamping out the cigarette bud. I wanted so dearly to run, run so far away. Frozen I just watched as the men further away seemed to circle around me.

                               My head was smacked to the floor as i was struck to the ground. I strugggled to get back up. I soon realised the other men had my arms and legs pinning me down. Pieces of my clothing eas ripped from my body. I was terrifyed, humilulated, demoralised. I knew what was coming but i didn't want to believe it.

 

6 months later. . . 

 

You're not going to find them it's been six months no one's presented them selves.

Eve, i'm sure about this one i know it's him.

How do you know! How? You weren't there, you didn't even know me then. He put his head, he knew more than she thinks. The talking stopped.

 

He left with a knife in his pocket and his heart on his sleeve. He had done wrong by her and he had to right that wrong. It was back when he was apart of gang crime, when he knew Evlana however she didn't know him yet. Unfortunatly he was involved, by killing the gang leader, will he compramise the love they share? these are all questions that traveled through his mind.

He loved her, but would that love be given up if she found out the truth, would she still love him? Still the same questions surrounded his thoughts.

 

 

Author's Note

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[Millie]

SOUL LESS: Your reviews are neither constructive or critical. You seem to be trying to keep up an "Image" by making your reviews insulting. However you may think this "perfectly stupid" is your opinion I do not challenge that but if this is not your cup of tea I advise you to stop reading my work. Because I will not change it to suite your tastes.

[SOUL LESS]

2ND LINE: you dont have to fight anymore.
Perfectly stupid. Look i'm not sure if it sounds that way due to the lack of expression or vocab, but it is perfectly ridiculous.
The 6 months earlier tense change is nice.
Great Job :)

[mortyJr]

how the hell do you come up with stuff like this. :)