signed your secret admirer

a poem I found in my locker

Long dark hair,

Pretty bright eye's

Your everything i need and you never lie'

Beauty personified, without a care.

I've loved your unique attitude and flair,

Your amazingly sweet.

Tough on the outside, tender within.

I'm pretty sure your Aphrodite's twin,

To have you would be a blessing,

to hold you would be an honor

I love to hear you sing

Of you I couldn't be fonder.

 

Signed,

 -Your "Secret" admirer.

 

Author's Note

Might be from my boyfriend but I'm not sure since he isn't really the type to write a poem like this... or any poem really! should i tell him about it? I got the urge to post it because i thought it sweet, overdramatic, but sweet.

Reviews

[Panda]

Naw! Don't make me blush :P hahaha kidding. But yeah this is sweet. I probs wouldn't tell you boyfriend (we tend to get jelly ((jealous)) lol) but if your fond of the idea of him writing to you you should suggest it to him for sure :P

[Ella]

That is super sweet!
My advice, don't tell him, I'd assume that your boyfriend would flip xD
Still, that's so cute!

[MissEpic2902]

lol thanks!! i probably won't tell him!! i think he'd go nuclear!! ((lol if i spelled nuclear right))

[Ella]

xD he probably would, all boys would.
Ya you spelled it right ;)

[MissEpic2902]

lol Thanks!! XD my friend wants me to say it was from him because my BF and him don't like each other!! I am not doing that!! lmao

[Ella]

xD your friend is a very awesome man!

[MissEpic2902]

lmao I agree!! He's super nice!!

[Ella]

I agree with him now xD do it!

[MachinaWriter]

Again, though, not telling him could really set him off if he finds out from someone else. And btw, Danielle, is that picture of you. Because I found it a while back and thought it was so awesome I made a drawing based off the posture. I saw the picture and was like "oh s**t, that's cool I've seen that pic before".

[Ella]

You are so right but he could also get really mad if he did find out to. it is a rock and a hard place.
I wish it was me but sadly I am not that gorgeous and camera don't like it ;)

[MachinaWriter]

Well, then it has to be decided on. One of them he'll just be a little angry, but it will be at someone else and it'll pass. The other one he'll be angry, it'll be more at you, and then there will also be trust issues and those last for a very long time.

[Ella]

Ooooor, he wrote it and was insulted that he thought you thought another guy wrote it.

[MachinaWriter]

This is why there's a confusion between guys and girls. Girls think of the most complex crap about guy's motives, when guys are really pretty simple. lol

[Ella]

xD yep, because there are quotations around the "Secret" which could be sarcasm.

[MachinaWriter]

Good catch. But he also says "to have you 'WOULD' be an honor", as if he doesn't already. Either way, debating and trying to figure things out behind the others back isn't good for a relationship. Its supposed to be about honesty and trust. I'd just tell him about the letter and ask if he wrote it. Simple.

[Ella]

Maybe he doesn't have her the way he wants fully though.
I wouldn't ask if he wrote it, but I'd tell him.

[MissEpic2902]

I told him.... He laughed and said he'd call me.. He never did.... Is that bad?

[Ella]

It is good that he laughed and boys forget all the time, I bet he just forgot to call you.

[MissEpic2902]

Okay so should i call him then?

[Ella]

Eh.... I'd text him not call him.

[MissEpic2902]

why not call?

[Ella]

I guess it doesn't really matter because you two have been dating for some time but I usually think that when someone says they'll call you, I wouldn't go calling them. I'd just text them like "Are you still going to call me?" or something like that. Like a casual brush off to show that it didn't really bother you or something like that.

[MissEpic2902]

coolio!! will definitly do that!

[Ella]

Alright :)

[MissEpic2902]

:D

[Belinda]

Its super sweet. Its obiviously someone that knows you well enough to know things about you, but it doesn't sound like it is from someone that you are already with, but for someone that longs to be with you. Good luck in finding out who it is!

[MissEpic2902]

Thank you! I appreciate your help!! :)