My eye's have finally been opened

My eye's have finally been opened

A Poem by MissEpic2902

I've made a realization.....
My eye's have been opened,
It took the destruction of my ever present concentration.
But my eye's have been opened,
I see now my foolishness.
My eye's have been opened,
I see now just how the people i thought i could trust were crouching in readiness,
My eye's have been opened,
To steal away the hope I had clung too.
My eye's have been opened,
Though for some reasons, it didn't seem like surprising news.
My eye's have been opened,
To just how much of a punching bag i have let myself become.
My eye's have been opened,
To just what i must do.
My eye's have finally been opened,
To a sight i never thought, and never wanted to think i would see.....


© 2012 MissEpic2902


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Im glad to have read this. Its a great feeling when one is liberated from seeing more clearer and realizing whats important in life. Great piece

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

Thank you!! I was going through a tough time when i wrote this!
This is very nice, I put a tune behind it right away, this could make a great song. Put a little bit of acoustic guitar in the background and a light drum beat... this is awesome!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

Thank you!! :D I'll definitely try that out!!
:) When I first started writing
My eyes helped me realized that how mature I was from my friends

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

Thank you
Very good, well written. It finishes off with leaving me wanting to know more. Love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

Thanks!

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16 years old, loves to cook, write, sing, dance, read, I'm pretty much up for anything!! I'm kind to everyone I meet unless you creep me out or tick me off then i might not be your best friend lol!! b.. more..

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