My Heart and Me

How people can change.

The heart is a funny thing

It can be broken many times

 

But then you came

Covered my heart with love...and shattered it.

 

I can't repair what you've done to me

Twisted and pulled my heart into a vise of ropes.

 

You tied me down and seperated me

From everything that wasn't you.

 

Pulled so tight, I was suffocating

"I love you" was your 'everything's alright'.

 

Then I saw you with her..up against the wall

That is when the ropes killed me.

 

Goodbye my heart..Goodbye my love

I left without a second thought and started a new life.

 

I'm not who I was

But I like who I've become.

Reviews

[X]

oh this is soo awsome, how you've been broken down by someone and then out of ashes comes a beautiful, confident phoenix. the line i like the most is
(I'm not who I was But I like who I've become) dudette that penetrates my thoughts completely. i also like the way this looks, like the lines on the left and right sides of the page, brilliant!

[X]

i think i forgot to rate last time

[Kayla_May]

wow i love it! and i feel like this poem relates to me because this is what you and AJ did (my boyfriend!)

[Pareidolia]

This has great structure and focus, and only a few small spelling errors(but that's serious nitpicking!).