L.O.S.T.

experimenting stuff.... a mini compilation....of sorts...

L ENITY

In the skies of my sorrow

No trespassers for a while…

Walking down my path trying to follow

That sweet light, that’s always ready to gift a smile

 

My lovely air wanderer

Keep caressing those clouds of my sky…

Some need a sun, others a conqueror

To slaughter the shadows that keep on coming by…

 

A silent gentleness

To paint one’s life in beauty

Because sometimes a small caress

Can save this world drowned in cruelty…

 

O BSESSION

 

Staring through the window

At a foreign life …

Unintentional linger

For a chat that’ll never arrive

 

Staring at the space…

Cause you’d be on my mind

That familiar stranger with no face

Tickling my sanity, that I’ve carefully designed

 

Staring into the night

At this disturbing intrusion in my life…

Dreaming of a forbidden delight

After all, you already have a wife…

 

S ANITY

 

Midnight waltzes

In the cemetery of my dreams

What are the chances

To resurrect those foolish things…

 

That are causing that sweet intoxication

Making me paint a lazy sky…

Life is tiresome, with every tiny fraction

Never really wondering why…

 

Why the God of Lightning

Has blessed the parting heavens…

Death is not as frightening

As it is the Life’s disturbing presence…

 

T IDE

 

Light and darkness

In eternal disparity…

Life is joy. Life is sadness.

Ends and begins with frightening regularity

 

The boy I loved…

The gravity I’ve beaten…

Heartache undeserved

Forever in my soul is written…

 

Time melting my days

Wave after wave…

And me, looking for the ways

To beat my fears…without being brave…

 

 

Reviews

[R Smith]

great idea Ana, missed your stuff for a while and you're back with a bang, this 4 part poem has a feeling of power and some emotions going on the first part second stanza is absolutely stunning, the second part is dark with its title 'Obsession' that desire for the unobtainable is strong with passion, the third part feels like falling into the arms of death but finding its not the terrible thing we fear, you come into part four in a philosophical manner the way of life joy and sadness mixed, the lost love, you left watching time drift away and searching for a way to survive fear to find peace of heart and mind, amazing writing, you're back!

[Ana B.]

oh wow, i really didn't expect to be missed or my missing to be noticed, thank you my good friend for the amazing review and warm welcome :)

[R Smith]

i'm pretty sure a lot of the folks on here will have missed you and your work, you're an outstanding writer :)

[Ana B.]

many many thanks my dear, i missed being here...

[AaronFreitas]

I like the format... love the creativity within each section. I am so glad to read one of your pieces... feels like it's been forever :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear for the most wonderful words!

[sereenaoutloud]

the format of this is superb Ana and the thoughts being separated in each stanza make a great impact!.
SO very creative and of course excellently penned!! :))

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much my friend :)I'm glad you enjoyed.

[Jamestown]

Wow! My talented friend you really put this piece together with a well
thought out and executed structure:) The separation of letters and thoughts
is brilliant and the delivery to each deserves a BRAVO! I am glad to have read
this fantastic piece of poetry! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Ah, thank you so very much my dear for always gifting me with amazing words!

[Robert]

Ana, this is a spectacular piece, I'm lost for words, its so good. I like how you separated into four. Such clarity to this piece and structured so well. I Can't say enough I like this so much and the emotions you put into this heart felt and tender piece.

[Ana B.]

Thank you Robert, it's beyond great to hear it from an amazing writer. I'm glad you liked, thank you again :)