Cloudy sky

Cloudy sky

A Poem by Ana B.

Do I know the notes of the glorious song of time?

Putting my dreams on pause…

When the sun gets too tired to shine -

You know you’re a lost cause.


While each of us take turns decoding reality,

With hollow hearts and floating minds,

Falling in love with destiny’s immorality…

Just don’t forget to close shut those blinds.


And while I’m crossing those sleepless roads

Beaten up by my own made-up sorrows,

Lost in the endless hole my mind erodes,

                               With the thought

Of leaving my delight to life’s tomorrows

                               Because why not…









© 2024 Ana B.

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reading gives me pause to reflect ... and read again ... the opening line is so introspective ... like trying to unravel the expanse of time and make sense of it ... it wears us out
our feelings can be a fearsome storm .. a ride on roller coasters ... mind boggling twists and turns .. i appreciate the comedic relief in V2 Ls 3&4 ... close those blinds ...
giving up can further the looming horrors of those holes of the mind .. or the giving up can allow a revelation of hope ... and the seedlings of Faith ;) love your poem .. really makes me think .. great honest stuff in it says i!

Posted 4 Months Ago

Ana B.

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much fir the amazing words EN ! :)
Comes moments when stopping to be - rather than think, rests the mind, stops the metronome, just IS..


Posted 4 Months Ago

Ana B.

4 Months Ago

Couldn't agree more, thank you for stopping by my dear :)

4 Months Ago

My pleasure and all that! Take care, keep safe, keep smiling.
Good seeing you again. I can readily relate to those thoughts.

Posted 5 Months Ago

Ana B.

5 Months Ago

Good seeing you as well Chris. Thank you for pausing here :)

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Added on February 3, 2024
Last Updated on February 3, 2024


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