A loving heart

I love to swim

In the pools of clouds wispy…

That life played on film

Savored in rapture like a good whiskey

 

I love to fly

Between the wings of insanity

With no place better than the sky

To watch over the bittersweet sentience of the humanity

 

I love to walk

On the golden streets of a pure mind

What use is there to talk

If words are just drops from the sea that is behind

 

I love to dance

In the middle of the sun kissed fields

Waiting for my chance

For the kisser of those fields to be relvealed…

 

 

Reviews

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Poets try to catch things on paper like feelings for example. We'll never be able to write a feeling down so that reading it would be the same as experiencing it. We can only try our best. Thank you for the inspiration Ana. :) Rudi

[Ana B.]

Thank you for your thoughts Rudi :)

[ANTO]

Free spirits must find this world an awful drag and get downheartened a lot.
This reminded me to stop to smell the flowers. It also recalled the playfullness of barefooted dancing Brigitte Bardot in 'And God Created Woman.'
I hope the kisser in the fields does reveal someday for such a spirit as this deserves such a lover.
Thanks for sharing Ana

[Ana B.]

Love the ideea too....i guess i'm lucky i can do it ( the barefoot running) in my back yard...hope you do it often, thank you ANTO ;)

[Sanjh]

Nice write Ana, it's a great reminder for how to live our life. Most of us don't remember to enjoy and live a monotonous life which is not actually living. It's like we've become robots or something. Great reminder Ana. :)

[Ana B.]

Sadly, you are right. Thank you Sanij :)

[B]

I love to dance
In the middle of the sun kissed fields
Waiting for my chance
For the kisser of those fields to be relvealed…


You spoke my heart
You are so beautiful

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much my sweet friend :)

[KWP]

ahh very nice - it represents a very good reminder to one and all to live in the now - to forget all else - to go within - and dance in the now - for yes when you are in the fields alone and ready you will be kissed over and over and the only person to witness it will be your 'knowing' self XX

quite beautiful Ana XX

[Ana B.]

Right you are, thank you very much for stopping by my friend :)

[Emily]

Love this one!
Keep it up!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Emily.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing journey in your words. A perfect journey to beautiful place and thoughts. Thank you Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana.

[Jamestown]

Fantastic write, very creative and well worded!
Imagery is amazing,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Thanks for reading James :) Have a splendid day.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

awwwww......
beautiful poem.......
things i would want to say.......
masterful expression.......
i loved it!!!
:)
p.s. if no one comes and you get tired of waiting..........nooooooo not that(!) i will find and bring the kisser by his collar!!! :) :)

[Ana B.]

ha ha, i'll hold you to that :D Thank you very much my sweet friend :)