instructions...

Kiss the rain away

That pours down on the lonely streets…

The sun hidden on this beautiful day

Cocooned between the softest cloudy sheets…

 

Smile in spite of the sadness

That crumbles those sand castles on your beach…

Life always dances in tune with the madness

…that destiny’s clever little witch

 

Open your eyes …

To be ready for the beauty

That flashes between the skies

Of the eternity’s ongoing movie…

 

Make a pancake from your sorrow

And leave it as a gift

To all those days we like to borrow

From life that went adrift…

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

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what a set of wonderful instructions that are offered with beautiful images that match the imagery of your words... it is always good to make pancake's from sorrow - love it!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much FT :)

[~]

Your words ALWAYS actively let us view the within of the folds of your mind.

[Ana B.]

Thank you beauty :)

[emmajoy]

'.. Life always dances in tune with the madness -- …that destiny’s clever little witch -- '

Exquisite. From start to finish, not a word or graphic out of place.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Emmajoy :) have a great weekend :)

[emmajoy]

My pleasure. Many thanks, same to you.

[MsJewel]

There is always a rainbow after the storm. Your poem is lovely and inspiring. Well done!

:) Julie

[Ana B.]

Thank you Julie :)

[MsJewel]

My pleasure

[ANTO]

We should treasure those days when everything seems to fit - rare as hen's teeth.
Making deals with the gods - can we trust them?
A lovely piece my friend. :)

[Ana B.]

:) gods are tricky....but they unlock many doors, thank you my friend :)

[ANTO]

Well they must be down on their luck if they're in the locksmithing trade now.
Sorry... I know..... I'll get me coat... xD

[Ana B.]

ha ha, well...and whose fault is that :) mingle with cerberus a bit and that's what happens...

[ANTO]

haha - indeed lol
too funny my friend xD

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the part about making a pancake from your sorrow---and i think it will need a little extra syrup....

[Ana B.]

Raspberry my fav....thank you Jacob.

[Gee]

Love a bit of rhyming verse,enjoyed this especially the last verse,sweet

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[Adam Adams]

You back to the Rhyme!

Another knockout of words... with anew winsome poetry. Loved it! You speak very well through the layers of your lines (poetry) in a very simplistic way. Keep it up!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much my dear :)