First rough draft of a book idea: Chapters One, Two & Three
Please read and review. Any pointers, tips, corrections are welcome. I mainly want to know if the story is interesting enough to compel the reader to read more...
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I think it is awesome my friend. I find it interesting and would love to see where you go with it and how you will develop the story as it progresses. Good work
It is beautiful, my friend! I am dying to know who had screamed and what all happened afterwards. The story is very compelling and interesting.
Maumil
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my story. Chapter Two will be available soon, where.. read moreThank you for taking the time to read and review my story. Chapter Two will be available soon, where we will learn who is screaming and what Luece will do if anything...
~peace, Todd
9 Years Ago
I will be waiting patiently for chapter 2...good luck :)
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