Whisper me a kiss…

"The Kiss" by Klimt

Whisper me a kiss…

Softly… softly brushing my cheek

As an - Oh! - so delicate caress…

A gentle kiss upon my fingertips,

So healing in its tenderness…

Breathing your kiss upon my mouth,

You softly whisper me a kiss…

Oh! Whisper me a kiss…

In your sweet breath is the promise

Wafting me gently to a healing space

This oft tossed ship carried ‘pon your breath

Oh! Let me harbor in your embrace!

Oh love… again… whisper me a kiss…

Set us free to sail ‘cross time and space.

Oh! Again… Whisper me a kiss…

In your arms, the promise of forever…

Shining as stars in your ebony eyes

Come my love, tomorrow’s our dawn…

Floating free as the star flies 

Our love, the vessel… you, my tether…

On whispered kisses, together we’ll rise.

Softly… Softly… Whisper me a kiss…

by D. Denise Dianaty

Author's Note

I finished this one, 08/30/2014.

Reviews

[MsJewel]

I love romantic poetry and this is breathtaking..
"whisper me a kiss" ... so soft, so sweet, so filled with passion without going over that fine line from sensual to erotic....and the painting you chose is the perfect compliment to your gorgeous poem.
Stunning!
:) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you so much. From you, this is high praise indeed.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing and beautiful poetry.
"Oh love… again… whisper me a kiss…
Set us free to sail ‘cross time and space."
Your description allowed the reader to feel the emotion and know the value of the kiss. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for the kiss.
Coyote

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Wow so much love and Elegance
as the words flutter across the page so beautiful.



Nicely penned thank you for sharing my friend BRAVO!




Oh! Whisper me a kiss…




In your sweet breath is the promise

Wafting me gently to a healing space

This oft tossed ship carried ‘pon your breath

Oh! Let me harbor in your embrace!

Oh love… again… whisper me a kiss…

Set us free to sail ‘cross time and space.




Oh! Again… Whisper me a kiss…




In your arms, the promise of forever…

Shining as stars in your ebony eyes

Come my love, tomorrow’s our dawn…

Floating free as the star flies

Our love, the vessel… you, my tether…

On whispered kisses, together we’ll rise.




Softly… Softly… Whisper me a kiss…




Blessings my Elegant friend. Benita

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. This is actually about my husband and a way he has when he kisses me. But, it's become a companion piece, with "Shariara's Lament," to my haunting and tragic short story, "The Dance Plays On…"

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh I am such a hopeless romantic and your poem makes me sigh and smile from ear to ear… Love it.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you very much. It's actually become a companion piece, along with "Shariara's Lament," for my short, tragic love story, "The Dance Plays On…"

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh that is cool, will have to check them out as well.

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks. Be baldly honest, please. I promise, I can take it.

[realmwriter]

I love it. It speaks of love in a very dreamy, cloud lifted way. It is being together in all the right ways and being in love for all of eternity. It is as romantic as a piece can be but without all the superfluous mushy stuff. It's like dancing with a kiss between the two of you and letting it draw you nearer still. Absolutely beautiful and lovely.

It inspired almost the juxtaposition, the... well I need say no more. You have spoken on the subject.

Your are quite good.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you very much. I'm very lucky to have a man in my life who is so completely gentle and giving. I was trying to convey this way he has with these caressing kisses… so gentle and passionate… so full of love and honesty. It's simply amazing. My words cannot do justice to that way he has.

[realmwriter]

I too cannot do justice to the way my love has either. I have tried and failed so I have not posted it here. If I can manage to achieve even a meager description of her way, then I will share it here. You are most welcome.

[MomzillaNC]

I look forward to reading it.

[realmwriter]

I look forward to writing it.

[Fran Marie]

A lovely soft piece here..whisper me a kiss..such beautiful poetic words..

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. I've had so many positively glowing reviews of this one. I can only think it speaks to people because it's my true experience and the gentleness we all hope for in life.

[Fran Marie]

Congratulations on this beautiful winning poem...a most deserving win indeed

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks so much. I admit, though, I was surprised. Will and Jewel must not have entered… they're among my favorite romantic poets.

[Fran Marie]

Yes, so many good writers on site...I like Will and Julie romance writes also..

[Unknown]

This poem is so real, it hurts... I'm glad SOMEONE is enjoying the blisses of love. Unfortunately, I'm not, but that's another story... ;)

[MomzillaNC]

I am very blessed indeed. Thanks for your review. I'm pleased you like this one.

[Unknown]

Oh, yes, I do... The style is so elegant, and even though I sometimes avoid romantic poems, I like this quite a lot! :)

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. My poetry is, for the most part, intensely personal and it cannot but please me that others find meaning in my struggles and victories, torments and blessings. I also hope it educates and gives hope to others.

[Unknown]

With the words you write, I'm sure you give hope to a lot of people! :)

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

This is a masterpiece. So many elements used to spice up this composition. It left me speechless.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. I'm a very lucky woman to have a man in my life who is genuinely that gentle. With this piece, i was trying to pen this way my husband has when he kisses me. It's simply incredible.

[Pryde Foltz]

Whisper me a kiss … now that is a refrain. I could just hear old blue eyes crooning away on this one.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. This was my attempt to pen this way my husband has about his touch and his kisses -- he's such an incredibly gentle giant of man.

Well, for me, it's my sweet "Ebony Eyes." (my husband has black eyes that you just loose yourself in -- at least, I did! :D)

[Pryde Foltz]

Lucky girl … still looking for a pair of eyes to get lost in.

[MomzillaNC]

I never forget just how lucky I am. I've seen the worst and survived it. And he's been my great gift from God. For every pain, every torment, I've received a dozen blessings… "pressed down, shaken together, and running over."

[Lyn Anderson]

I can't think of one critique, from the title to the flow to the content, it is a wonderful, sexy, sensual delight. P.S. the tether is a brilliant line.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you very much.

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

I know this is more a love poem, but you make a simple kiss erotic, hahahaha. It's clever.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. This is actually my attempt to capture this way my husband has, this indescribable gentleness… He really does seem to "whisper me a kiss…" I'm a very lucky lady.