A Child Cries

A Child Cries

A Poem by MomzillaNC


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A watering hole dries up

     and the milk cow dies

          Hungry, a child cries


On battles rage as the village

     burns ‘neath blue skies

          Bloodied, a child cries


A mother, taken, weeps

     from beaten, swollen eyes

          Frightened, a child cries


Hatred grows, terror is loosed

     Humanity lost as the arrow files

          Orphaned, a child cries


A child grows with no hope

     eating only hatred’s lies

          Broken, a child cries


Hatred puts a gun in a child’s hands

     While the world cries

          And the child dies


by D. Denise Dianaty 

© 20 Nov 2015


Pick up your own copy of my first book of poetry, 

entitled My Life In Poetry at D. Denise Dianaty

http://www.amazon.com/D.-Denise-Dianaty/e/B00S8R9PV2/ref=sr_ntt_srch_lnk_1?qid=1430914210&sr=8-1

© 2015 MomzillaNC


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It's well written, nothing original but still a good worthwhile read. I take this meaning - It's not hatred itself, it is the circumstances that contain it and then release it that ruins lives. Hatred is an emotion not devoid of purpose, but when that's all their is it becomes the driving force behind that person/culture/ideology's actions then horror and injustice spreads like a virus. Ignorance and narrow minded views perpetuate inadequate or sometimes even exacerbating solutions.

Even if that was not your meaning, it's what I got, I'm happy with it, and your words are responsible for that. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

8 Years Ago

That was precisely my meaning. Thank you for your erudite understanding.



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a simple and powerful work, a writing with a purpose, profound work

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
It's well written, nothing original but still a good worthwhile read. I take this meaning - It's not hatred itself, it is the circumstances that contain it and then release it that ruins lives. Hatred is an emotion not devoid of purpose, but when that's all their is it becomes the driving force behind that person/culture/ideology's actions then horror and injustice spreads like a virus. Ignorance and narrow minded views perpetuate inadequate or sometimes even exacerbating solutions.

Even if that was not your meaning, it's what I got, I'm happy with it, and your words are responsible for that. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

8 Years Ago

That was precisely my meaning. Thank you for your erudite understanding.
Wow. Just wow...What can be said? This...is what writing all about. Filled with purpose and awareness, capturing truth...and profoundly putting it in black and white. Such a message, such a beautiful way of writing it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

8 Years Ago

Thank you for such effusive praise. I’m truly honored. I believe: If I’m given a voice or an opp.. read more
hi dear it is sad what man is capable of so kind so cruel

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

8 Years Ago

I understand your perspective. I share most of the same perspective. But, in this real world, we nee.. read more
Tate Morgan

8 Years Ago

defending our freedom should be done from within our borders By the way we dont have a single contes.. read more
Tate Morgan

8 Years Ago

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kI4tmX8yEKQ Where do they get the arms to fight us ? From us!
poignant write and so apt in these days of turmoil where children are used and abused.
so unfair that children are subjected to the horrors of the world.
sometimes I think there's no hope for humanity.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Woody. I feel it’s even more unfair and tragic that those living embodiments of possibilit.. read more
Woody

8 Years Ago

so true, Mom.
MomzillaNC

8 Years Ago

:( I wish it wasn’t.
Simple words with a powerful meanings. Hatred puts a gun a child’s hands (Am I reading this right?) A good piece never the less!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

8 Years Ago

Yes, oops! Thanks for pointing that out. Should be “in a”
MomzillaNC

8 Years Ago

It’s corrected now. Thanks. Thanks for hate review.
you have captured the truth in a moment ..children born with limitless possibilities are torn and pasted down a murderous and hateful road .. i am grateful for the perspective of your poem ..the actual acts of terrorism are horrific and complete in themselves but you show us the root ...and with all my heart i believe that can be changed ... if we can only reach them in time :(
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

8 Years Ago

Thank you. It breaks my heart. It give me nightmares. I wish I could lift every child out of such ho.. read more
Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

yes ... so say we all of good and fervent heart .. love and peace Momz ... love and hugs to you too .. read more
MomzillaNC

8 Years Ago

:D :D

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