Mailde

Mailde

A Poem by Mother_Yolk
"

Dedicated to my fellow buddy, Gabriel

"
Dreaming about 
falling,
Waking up and not 
dying,
Not seeing what's in plain view, 
But modestly 
smiling.
Happy, but 
crying.
You're trying and 
trying
But, all you do
Is practice your 
lying.
You deceive your 
peers
Just to overcome your 
fears
And stop the 
tears...

And that's what scares me the most.

© 2014 Mother_Yolk


Author's Note

Mother_Yolk
Someone I know always says "...and that's what scares me the most..."
So I made a poem.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


First off, love the name. Secondly, I like the simplicity of it. Thirdly, it's deep and I'm a sucker for deep s**t. Fourthly, I adore that you dedicated it to someone. ^-^

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mother_Yolk

10 Years Ago

Hahah Mailde... She always says that and it really puts me on edge. Much obliged, Sofa Master lol
"You deceive your

peers

Just to overcome your

fears

And stop the

tears.."

A powerful write. Thank you for penning...:).....




Posted 10 Years Ago


Mother_Yolk

10 Years Ago

Haha your review is much obliged. (: Thank you!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

:)........................
Haha nice poem! it's not complex at all and it's great how you were inspired to make a poem by remembering someone else's words... good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mother_Yolk

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I felt compelled to write this. The person says it more than you imagine - it's q.. read more

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Added on March 25, 2014
Last Updated on March 25, 2014
Tags: Fears, Tears, Smiling, Dying, Crying, Lying, Deceive, Lies

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Mother_Yolk
Mother_Yolk

Somewhere in South America.



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