Elizabeth {She Broke My Heart}

My heart flutters like a crippled butterfly though only for a moment.

My mind fills with disbelief, shoving my heart down into my stomach, to have the acid destroy this memory.

Later my entire body rages with anger because of this act that I’m not entirely sure was true, but deceitful and evil.

Reviews

[matrixmark]

Very relatable (many years ago)
It's almost as if you can feel the rage, anger and disappointment coming of from the page. I fee this was written from the heat. and I hear every word of it.

Mark.

[Andrew M Parker]

I felt all of that when i wrote it... it was a very sad time for me. this poem was written maybe a little less than a year ago. it still hurts majorly.

[matrixmark]

I feel for you and totally get where your coming from.
Time does heal - it did for me.

Mark.

[Steve Ryan]

Ouch; dark poetry. Stunted and curt, much like the feeling one gets when reality disappoints.

[Andrew M Parker]

I guess so ..

[Jimmy Yetts]

Your hurt and outrage powerfully conveyed.
Vivid imagery propels this visceral write.
Hard-hitting stuff, Andrew!

[Andrew M Parker]

It is, thank you. :)