lies

Living days, she stay he stays

and noone leaves, and noone cares

And noone dares to tell the truth

The words unsaid, misunderstood...

Silent! words are losing their sounds

Lies, nonstop, doesnt know the bounds.

Silence hides away all phrases

Write down thoughts, meaningless theses!

Makes you scream inside your mind 

Always lose and never find.

Tangled? Yes! That is life!

Always care how to survive!

Fears killing every hope

quit it, cut it... just stop!

Tired, lifeless and so lost

Lies are saved at any cost.

Reviews

[SuspectGray]

When the frequency of lies outweighs the frequency of truth...then indeed words lose there sounds and become silent.

[J.R.H.]

Good stuff. I really enjoyed it! The first stanza is probably my favorite. If I had a suggestion it would be stanza 2 line 2: Lies, nonstop, doesnt know the bounds.
suggestion: Lies, nonstop, never know their bounds.
But either way, I loved the read!

THX,
JRH

[Helena]

J.R.H thanks for the review! I am glad you enjoyed my verse ! :)

[An owl on the moon]

So painfully expressed... yes.. how lies cut and tear at the fabric of our souls... leave us empty... aching... Powerful poetry...

[Helena]

Thank you! every lie kills us inside... I do know it!

[Tomorrowneverknows]

Helen it is really beautiful dark poem. I am fully agree with each line, I fully understand each feeling...

"Always care how to survive!
Fears killing every hope
quit it, cut it... just stop!


Tired, lifeless and so lost
Lies are saved at any cost. "

"Always care to survive!" ...

Cursed fate my dear Helen!!

- Jesus

[Helena]

The ugly truth abt our lies my dear friend)