If I tell you

If I tell you

A Poem by Mrudula Rani
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Happy valentine's day

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If I tell you how much l like you,
Would you think I have fallen head over heels for you?

If I tell you that when I don't hear from you I feel blue,
Would you think I am addicted to you?

If I tell you I have to share my thoughts with you often,
Would you think you are the only friend I have?

If I tell you that I can hear your laughter, and your sorrows in your voice,
Would you think that you own my heart?

If tell you even though we are miles apart I feel your presence
Would you think I am psychic?

If I tell you when I read your words they seemed to speak to me,
Would you think my world revolves around you?

Because when I told you I am glad you are in my life,
You sent me a valentine!

© 2018 Mrudula Rani


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Oh wonderful! What a lovely poem to read on Valentine's day ...today!!!!! I hope he takes up that Valentine's card hint!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

What a sweetest review from my dearest poet and friend. Thank you very much, Great Astri!
Great Aunt Astri

6 Years Ago

:}..................
Lovely poem Mrudula...
i love all of it :))

mmmm some special people walk into our life like wind and then they stay, growing their roots into our heart and everything feels magical... each heart beat feels like its worth living...
just the sad part is when they walk away... leaving the remains of the root in our heart...

Happy V - Day :) enjoy ur day!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Special people never hurt those who love them, if someone left ( leaving their roots) they are not .. read more
Ardra

6 Years Ago

mmmm :) thank you...
Your words and questions reveal the romantic in you, the lover in thought and action. Your smooth style is very good and elegant.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful review my dear poet, I appreciate your comments dear friend.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...

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Added on February 13, 2018
Last Updated on February 14, 2018
Tags: Valentines, love, heart, life