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Septolet

Searching
For the misplaced,
and those I want.

Happiness, hope.
Sorrow,
That might follow
Forever.

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

Compelling septolet. (How come a septolet only has six lines?)
Says a lot with so little.
Well done, M!

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you for reminding me JY.

[Jimmy Yetts]

That was a sincere question, M.
I don't know a thing about septolets--except for recognizing "seven" in the word!

[Mrudula Rani]

Still I appreciate your kindness.

[mou]

I dare to search for those lovable things with a concern for more damage to this torn soul. very concise selection of words that touches the heart at first shot

[Mrudula Rani]

How nice to hear from you, were on holidays? Thank you for the lovely review.

[mou]

no, it was due to some project work..again it's wonderful to have your words :)

[Mrudula Rani]

It's always wonderful to see your beautiful smiling face. All the best.

[mou]

thank you :)

[Ranger Kessel]

I am such a lover of brevity and wish I could exercise it more myself. This piece is so well written. It doesn't need excess verbiage. You can say so much by not saying more. I enjoyed this and glad I stopped by for the read. Thanks for posting

[Mrudula Rani]

I am glad you liked this septolet, it is easier than Haiku.

[Sami Khalil]

Another great one of your pen. You are using brevity to get your message across.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you for your lovely observations, I appreciate them very much.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. You are welcome.

[Neville]

very near perfect if you ask me.... and so very write too......Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you dear friend for your kind words.

[Neville]

always a pleasure..... N