Reverie

Long
to delve
deep into
Sea of sonants,
Scour, superlatives
To forge grand cathedrals
Cataratas, clouds of silver.
Whither my euphoria knits
With the magnificence of nature
to pirouette for the pleasure of soul.

Reviews

[Neville]

To quote Professor Higgins in Pygmalion by George Bernard Shaw "By Jove I think she's got it"... I think you have well and truly got it Mrudula, be proud my friend, your poetry has come of age..... Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you dear Neville for your very kind and affectionate words.

[Neville]

Nothing but a pleasure and of course true... N

[Mrudula Rani]

Você é uma amor!

[Neville]

I am well and truly honoured M...

[Chris Shaw]

Your Reverie a delightful read M. I am loving your choice of language and the imagery your lines bring to this reader Thank you.

Chris

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank your C. You are very kind.

[emptyinkwell]

I love your poetic artistry! The way you made this poem shaped like a light beam makes it all the more radiant and powerful! It feels like I am lost in daydream somewhere in a lavender field in France.

Does "cataratas" mean cathedrals?

Keep writing! :)

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you for your warm and lovely review. Cataratas is waterfalls . In Brasi we have one of the best, spectacular waterfalls called 'Cataratas de Iguaçu'.It is breathtakingly beautiful.

[emptyinkwell]

Oh yeah! I've seen pictures!

It's cool that this poem has a waterfall effect.

[emmajoy]

You really are the mistress of echoing words, Mrudula! Long after i read your poetry, i hear the music of it.. goodness knows how you do it, tis near magical!! Here you use phrases as if complex chords that only the most nimble mind can create. Brilliant sound, truly.

'To forge grand cathedrals ~ Cataratas, clouds of silver. ' You've forged, believe me!

[Mrudula Rani]

Emma dear, you are very kind ... always have sweet, affectionate words to make me feel like a poet. Thank you beautiful young lady.

[barleygirl]

This is an amazing statement that I had to read twice to really soak in the meaning. Truly the most unique way of looking at "reverie" . . . something I like to do often. You've challenged me with new words, too! Love your alliteration, especially "p" in last line (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Mrudula Rani]

It is wonderful to be connected once again here on WC with you. I hope all your computer problems are solved. Thank you Margie for your lovely review, I am always looking forward to your thoughts on my words with much enthusiasm. Uma beijo para você Querida. Tudo de bom.

[barleygirl]

I got my new computer yesterday & on Monday I will get a new satellite dish (on the roof) & modem (on desktop). After that I will be one happy girl! *yippee!*

[Jimmy Yetts]

Lovely sentiments creatively conveyed.
Outstanding, M!

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you for the visit, dear jimmy.

[Paul Bell]

If only we had time.
I wonder if we spend our lives thinking about doing things. But never actually doing them.
Put that in my diary.

[Mrudula Rani]

You have to make time for little pleasures in life!

[CD Campbell]

Witty, Mrudula! You were able to create a complex poem without sacrificing intent or gorgeous imagery. Great work.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you CD, I treasure your reviews.