Without You

What has come over me?

I'm not the girl I used to be

Why do I break so easily?

Become weak constantly

 

Without you, I feel alone.

Without you, I just can't find my way.

Without you, I find it hard to smile

Without you, I am without life.

 

What has become of me?

A girl who was once strong

What happened to me?

No longer Miss. Independent.

 

Cause..

Without you, I am no more

Without you, I just cry

Without you, I live in sorrow

Without you, there is no tomorrow.

 

Without you, there is no more me.

Author's Note

Inspired by a few songs and well my thoughts needed to be let out. This is dedicated to my wonderful boyfriend Mike Pierce.

Reviews

[Michael Kerr]

this poem made me cry. i feel all these thing right know sense she left me.
i miss her smile, i miss her laugh, i miss her touch, i miss her voice,
i miss her kindness, and when i though she loved me. i miss it all.
i am sorry my friend to tell you about these things. you did an excellent job!

your friend,
-mike-

[WordMaster]

The emotion behind this words is chilling if this is what your feeling

You have presented such a powerful feeling that most of us know about and wish
didn't happen

Excellent rhythm and pace

Well done from start to finish

[Adela Muresan]

:) .

I like your simple description of the love curse' manifestation.

A.M.

[Partha]

Simple words of depression, simple composition and flow, simple style of writing, simply beautiful!