A never ending Love.

A never ending Love.

A Poem by Rhine Wolf
"

life is so short. so Love, laugh, and above all Live,

"

 

Before her, he stands
Silhouetted by the bright light
She needs to see him before it starts
 
She stands before him
So small and vulnerable
He is looking at his heart
The beauty of it is blinding
 
Tentatively she reaches out
Heart pounding
Heavy breathing
He meets her half way
 
Finally they touch
Worlds collide
Heaven and earth meet
Soon they will be one
 
The spell is broken
With the words uttered
“We are gathered here today…”
Nothing ells really matters.
 
Time has stood still
Finally their souls will be one
Hand in hand, they turn and walk into the mist.
“… to lay to rest our beloved sister…”

© 2008 Rhine Wolf


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This is so well written.I had to read it a few times..Love Never Dies..Beautiful//Love how you showed what was happening on the earthly plane..a funeral..and what was happening on the spiritual plane..the reconciliation of the two lovers..and the description of how he could see her heart..beauty that was blinding..very deep and special!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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I enjoyed this very much. The imagery was beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, the ending was unexpected...but it's a beautiful poem nevertheless.
I like the ,,sublime,, way you present the spiritual union, and the detail of the clerk's words.

A.M.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This excellent poem is moving and really well written, has a way of creating an emotion
in the reader and cause the heart to look inward with a sense of grief and sorrow,
intently invented metaphorical reflection describing intense sorrow, missing someone
close to the heart, I loved it, great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderfully crafted and emotionally charged poem.

You have done a magnificent job of expressing emotion in loving imagery

Well done


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so well written.I had to read it a few times..Love Never Dies..Beautiful//Love how you showed what was happening on the earthly plane..a funeral..and what was happening on the spiritual plane..the reconciliation of the two lovers..and the description of how he could see her heart..beauty that was blinding..very deep and special!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rhine Wolf
Rhine Wolf

Johannesburg, Heathen, South Africa



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