Thoughts of You

Thoughts of You

A Poem by Ms Jessica Renee
"

Consume my mind.

"

Been thinkin' about you

Watching the day fade

Just wonderin' about you

As the minutes fly by

 

I just can't seem to understand

Why it is you

My mind commands

All the time

 

Thought for thought

Without you

I'm distraught

 

Cause lately

I just can't escape

You are all I think about

© 2008 Ms Jessica Renee


Author's Note

Ms Jessica Renee
Just a random addition to my works. I hope you enjoy.

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wonderful confession to hold the sensation the love of your life. Nicely stated by the beautiful flow of simple and pure words! I like the idea.

"Thought for thought

Without you

I'm distraught" I like this portion very much.

Thank you

Raja


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ebs
Great!
Loved it.
Your a awesome writer Jess.

air kisses
ebs

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so absolutely awesome!! Thinking about the memories one had with the other; it brings back reflections, either great or not so good. But the main thing is that u both experieced it Together. I can relate to this much as well. Very beautiful and touching poem :)

B.A.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

:))
I an surely relate to this.
A true love poem , Jessica, congrats !!

A.M.


Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on July 21, 2008

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Ms Jessica Renee
Ms Jessica Renee

A Chaotic State of Mind, TX



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