Wind Haiku

Photo is from Google Public Domain

Wind

Tinkling chimes betray

The invisible presence

On a windy day.

Reviews

[Seshat Nidaba]

I like this, my Grandmother used to have these chimes at the lake house, they were quite glorious.

[WhiteWillow]

I love your haiku...look forward to reading more!

[MsMermaid]

Thank you for your thoughtful review, Kesav. I will read your contributions as well and comment.

[Kesav Easwaran]

Nice haiku...the contrast in the phrases 'tinkling chimes'/'invisible presense' adds wonderful meaning to the imagery inside...rhyming lines add beauty to the short passage