These Are A Few Of My Favorite Things

These Are A Few Of My Favorite Things

A Poem by Dalaina Renee
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Just A Silly Poem Which Goes Along From The Song

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These Are A Few Of My Favorite Things

 

Starbucks, and shopping.

99 cent stores.

Ebay, garage sales, need I say more?

Snowflakes, falling as fast as the rain.

These are a few of my favorite things.

 

Comics, and cocoa,

my ipod is handy.

Beaches and swimming,

sunscreen is a jim dandy.

Sharing my pictures,

singing off tune.....

These a few of my favorite things.

 

When the kids scream,

when my cat barfs,

when my bill gets lost in the mail....

I simply remeber my favorite things,

and then I won't feel so bad!

© 2008 Dalaina Renee


Author's Note

Dalaina Renee
Corny, I know. It was just something funny to see if I could come up with.

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love it and the sound of music my all time fav

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm a big fan of The Sound of Music, and this new version is great. Unfortunatley, now the song is stuck in my head.

Nice job. :D Thanks for the review, by the way.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This was a cute piece! I loved the first two stanzas, they were very nicely written and the flow felt great. The last stanza seemed to lack a little bit of the flow that the first two had so nicely. Overal, nicely done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I love it, made me laugh and if I read it again, will laugh some more! Could hear the tune as I read it.. clever you for putting YOUR own lyrics!

You've a great variety of favourites! Still laughing. First time I've really laughed for a couple or so days..

It's so good to share smiles and fun. Thank you very much for sharing. :-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


OMWord, I'm laughing hysterically. Especially at the "when my cat barfs" part! What a goofy and fun write! And I like your favorite things list. You've got some gooders in there. ;) Nice, fun write. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Welcome to my page! My name is, Dalaina Renee. I am a 32 yr old single mother of two little men. Whom I love with all of my heart. When I have free time I love to write. I love to write poems,short s.. more..

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