Lily on the Water

Lily on the Water

A Poem by Aimee Mahathy
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... uh... yeah

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Dancing on tips of porcelain toes,

She billows and unfolds

Neath a cradling sky.

So brave on a languid,

Liquid ballroom floor.

 

Delicate curvature,

Countenance of lace,

Knowing all the while,

A riotous waterfall- her fate.

 

How wise she is in her

Velvet enclosure.

© 2009 Aimee Mahathy


Author's Note

Aimee Mahathy
This probably needs editing to. Upon typing it here, I revised it a bit. Although, I am hardly ever a fan of my own writing. u.u

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This is so profoundly beautiful with your vivid, honest description. This is just what I needed. Thank you!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on October 31, 2009

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Aimee Mahathy
Aimee Mahathy

Bloomington, IL



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I'm 33 now, much more settled into myself, and getting back to it again. The previous about me is gonna stay for now, since it's still somewhat accurate and I need some time to figure out what to say .. more..

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