My Life is Turning

My Life is Turning

A Poem by Nish Nish the Fish
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My coming to realization that life ain't gonna stop, or slow down, or take a break....which just sucks.

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Why is it that everyday,

and in everyway,

and through every phase,

my life spins around, creating a misty haze.

It hits me in a 100 different ways,

puts me in a scary daze,

like it's my hungry predator, and i'm it's helpless prey.

my life is turning,

on a single point,

I'm on the tips of my toes,

trying to balance this joint.

Cuz' if i let go,

if i fell of this beam,

if i let  go of my dreams,

if i ripped out every seam,

that holds my life together,

if my conscience came clean,

my life would not turn,

to it's next thrilling scene,

and the whole world would topple,

and so would my regime.

My life keeps on turning,

from one scene to the next,

keeps on high speed,

no stopping,

no time to rest.

My life is turning,

on an axis that defies the earth,

refurbishes my reality,

closes the gap between death and birth.

My life is turning,

and never will it burn,

and forever will it turn,

and turn and turn and turn.

© 2009 Nish Nish the Fish


Author's Note

Nish Nish the Fish
its been a while since ive written a poem! a whole month or so! yikers!
tell me i haven't forgotten how to do this =?

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Yep, indeed, all of this is true. We can control our lives, however, we unfortunately cant control fate. That's usually in the hands of God. We just gotta do the best we can in this life, i guess, and do good in general. I think that's what makes us great, i guess. This was really awesome. Great job!!

B.A.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh my. Very powerful! (:

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 26, 2009
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Nish Nish the Fish
Nish Nish the Fish

Kansas City, KS



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I feel this deserves an update..seeing as i'm no longer 16 ;) Well, of course i still love writing poetry, I'm actually in a poetry class right now! It's dandy.. I like the color red, alot. I C.. more..

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