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Participating a contest with subject Rush, Rush hour - impacts and reflections

Rush hour...

 

Things to do, things to remember...

Remember to set the alarm - check!

Remember to chek in - check!

Remember to check the mailbox - check!

Remember to respond to mails - check!

Remember appointments - check!

Did I miss any ?

Did I tell you that, or did you tell me?

No, it cant be that I have said this once before...

Check in - check out...

 

Checking out...

Schedules forgotten...

Dentist

Doctors appointment

Excuses, once again...

A gesture showing me that I should care...

Things are based on coinsidences...

It´s my life, I do love it...

I think...

 

Things to do...

Meeting with my childrens father (did I forget?)

Buy a present for my best friend (was it birthday or ?)

To call my mother (could it be 2 weeks since I forgot?)

Tell my lover I really appreciate him, maybe I can postpone that since

I need more time, maybe next time...

Go to the vet with 8 of my to many cats (how did they grow so fast?)

Flowers need water, how I fight for my flowers !

 

 

Things never to forget...

Smile every day !

Laugh every day !

Love every day!

Write more often !

Sing a song even you cant sing!

Embrace life and cherrish every moment !

To be present...

 

List of wishes:

Time...

 

(Written in between 2 meetings a monday morning, not edited - just words on "paper")

 

Reviews

[Laura E. Aranda]

This was a fresh breath of air
I like to read things I can understand
appreciate and relate to
now, who am i writing to again?
Oh yeah
you
HA
Cheers, lea

ps
you misspelled cherish...you spelled it with two rrs

[Elyse Maxwell]

I really enjoyed this piece. I have days where I feel just like that!
I love the rhythm you've created with repetition

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A theme which most of us can relate to. You'r poem touched on quite a lot of our "rushed" world in chaos. Thank you for sharing.

[MY]

Yes you got a point, and maybe all this sense of rush is a kind of chaos, I got your point !

[Jack Lynn Alexandar]

As a busy day, it does well as is. And, yet, I can't help but feel as though one or two items are missing from the list. If you wanted to ratchet up the tension, you'd, of course, have to mention those times when the whole thing gets thrown into chaos when an item doesn't work out as planned and one has to scurry to save the timeline for the rest of the day.

[NikAvant]

I knew You could do it! I think it's great and there are many passages in there, that I recognize. There are passages, which I like very much.
It's amazing that You can do it just like that, and I understand every single word You write here.
Thank You for this contribution MY. I know I'll read this many times - if I for a split second should have doubts (which I don't).
It goes straight into my heart!