A Poem by Mjr. Tom

How do I word these feelings?

Feelings that flow from my heart?

Do you know how ingrained you are

In my soul?

I need to tell you... I love you...

When you're with me I feel perfect... whole

You take away all the pain

With the gentle touch of your voice

Stay with me...forever...for I need you

Do you know how often I've cried in

My sleep, my pillows are stained

I don't cry anymore, don't shake anymore

When we're together, eyes locked in place

The world around us seems to freeze

We know our place (together)

Our souls piece together

Like the perfect puzzle

We fit together, piece by broken piece

I'd die just to hold you... I love you

I just wanted to say-goodnight.

© 2011 Mjr. Tom

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I can relate to this poem.. it was how i felt toward my ex fiance.. If this poem is about a woman in your life.. she is very luck to have you :) Great write..


Posted 9 Years Ago

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I think you just worded those feelings perfectly! the words all melt into each other as the picture and scene develops!! nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago

To the point, driven home like a Barry Bonds home run. Awesome work!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Line by line, phrase by phrase, you slowly slide into a warm admission of love, sweet love: ' I love you ~ I just wanted to say-goodnight ' ..

Posted 9 Years Ago

this write was great, good job
-Meja Malina

Posted 9 Years Ago

How do I word these feelings? I have tried since I began writing to word the feelings of love and it goes on and on. There are so many ways and you have done a wonderful job.............

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on May 14, 2011
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Mjr. Tom
Mjr. Tom

Beaufort, SC

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