WON'T YOU?

TEARDROPS HITTING THE FLOOR

MY HEART HITTING YOUR DOOR.

STILL CONCEALING MYSELF WITH SMILES

FADING AWAY AT THE FEET OF "GOOD-BYE".

WON'T YOU OFFER ME A SHAWL THIS NOVEMBER?

WON'T YOU GIFT ME A KISS THIS WEEK?

WON'T YOU LAY DOWN ON MY LAP TONIGHT?

WON'T YOU EVER CUSHION ME WITH YOUR HUGS?

WON'T YOU EVER STOP TO LOOK BACK?

WON'T YOU EVER MISS THE NIGHTS WE TANGLED IN THE BED?

OR THE SUNSETS WE ENJOYED? 

IF NOT ME, NOT EVEN MY LOVE 

WON'T YOU MISS?

LET US SIT BACK IN THE PAST

LET US ABANDON THE PAIN

LET US MOISTEN OUR DROUGHTED HEARTS

AND BE TOGETHER AGAIN... 

 

Reviews

[Muskan]

Your poem narrates a full story.one can actually sketch the scene through your lines😊loved it👍

[Deep]

"Let us sit back in the past"
That's wonderful poem. Third stanza- November then week then tonight, it felt musical to me, and it also tells your poetic skills. Beautiful one!

[Paul Bell]

You write it well.
He's not coming back.
But the dreams are still there.

[NEHA]

caught it right!
anyway thank you for stopping by my poems!
#cheers

[Wild Rose]

Hope you do get back together

[NEHA]

thanks for showing me care but I'm not engaged...this was just a casual poem-not my life nor my love story...

[¿]

The second line uh, so much agonising love I guess! Truly lovely poem!!!

[NEHA]

HAHA..THANKS SIS!
;3