Venom.

Venom.

 

Too much. It’s just too much. It was too much. She couldn’t take it. Her hands went numb. Her face stained with hot tears. Venom flowing through her veins. She hated them with a passion, all of them. The nameless, the faceless, the heartless. All they did was scream at her, scold her, laugh at her. She couldn’t take it.

Tears filled her eyes till she couldn’t see anymore and slowly, one by one fell down her cheeks. Venom pumped hard and fast through her veins, her anger encouraging the spread. The hate grew to an incredible size until she simply couldn’t take it anymore. It was no wonder why she did it. It was obvious that she would. One day.

 

Revelation.

 

Her expression was too calm. Too happy. There was no way that she could be so happy on a day like this. So bleak, so droll. What could possibly be causing this outrageously ludicrous happiness.

 

Murder.

 

The handle felt so right in her hand. Each swing felt so natural to her. She finally understood why they did it. Why they killed. So satisfying, gratifying. She loved it. Plunging deep into the nameless chest she carved out a hole. Out goes their heart. A swift slash across the neck. Off goes their head. Who’s next?

 

Vengeance.

 

It was finally complete. She finally felt at peace as she dropped into the depths of the burning water below her. Fire kissed her face and the water embraced her completely drowning her with love. It was finally complete.

 

Author's Note

Not emo, just angry. =P

Reviews

[Su' Nacnetaf]

I liked it, very emotional and makes me think alot about what could've been happening in the character's mind, a lot psychological states fit in the scene, but not every one of them actually fits in the chracter's mind, which makes it a challenge for me to find out with so little reference to compare. Great writing, simple great, keep up the good work.

[Adela Muresan]

How well you describe the passing from sadness to anger and to madness; and how evil takes over the tormented soul.

The carnage images in ,,,Murder,, are majestic.
The picture is appropriate, but I think that you could of chosen a less ugly one :P.

A.M.