Star

STAR

In the dark sky, there was a star,

Looked near but yet so far.

Seen by all, wanted by few

People say, you see that daily. What’s new?

Looking at stars says something

For me that's a presence of missing.

So, that's why I ask myself, "Whom do I miss?"

                                    I ask it, "Is it my past?"             

Heart whispers, "It’s that special one whom you would love and from your past you would choose none"

It’s such a pretty sight to look at stars,

My life is empty without you,

Like a night without any star.

Reviews

[Sonakshi Arora]

You are definitely a star Najam 😂😂❤❤ Lovely poem by you :D

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you :) My name's meaning is also star. Najam Us Saher means morning star :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

That is so nice to know. Poem title in point, then I would say ;)

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh yeah :)

[SZHZIA]

Another wonderful poem with a nice imagination using nature as metaphors to express your emotions and feelings that you have for someone. I love the these lines the poem:
"Heart whispers, "It’s that special one whom you would love and from your past you would choose none"

It’s such a pretty sight to look at stars,

My life is empty without you,

Like a night without any star."
A very thoughtful poem and I love it. Thanks for sharing.

Best
szhzia

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you I am glad you liked it. And I know that you'll write you are welcome as always... 😀😁

[SZHZIA]

Yes, I know but to write it is a gesture for a respect of poet. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh! Thank you so much for considering me as a poet and for your respect I appreciate it. ☺

[SZHZIA]

we should have respect for everyone even for enemies. and you are welcome. :)

[Valentine]

I used to always wish on a star, funny most never came true. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

God has better plans for you just don't stop wishing :)