Seashell on the ground

SEASHELL ON THE GROUND 

Like a seashell I remain on the ground,

Some notice and pick the best ones,

While some are left around.

I feel I am the left one which no one cares about,

I have been picked once,

But thrown back to the ground.

I feel I am the worst surrounded by the best,

Like a seashell which is lying on the beach,

I feel so alone untouched and beyond one's reach.

I still feel lonely when I have everyone around,

I am diving deep in my agony,

I am waiting to be found.

Care for me before I am buried in the ground,

Otherwise I would be merely lying,

Like a seashell on the ground.

Reviews

[Valentine]

Sad thoughts..maybe that shell has to drop off and step out into the real world. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

You have a very nice and pleasing way of reviewing I like that. Thank you so much :)

[Skib]

A very simple, yet very effective poem. You have taken what everyone takes for granted (shells) and wrote about them in a personal and quite sad way. We notice you here Najam!! We wont throw you back to the ground. :)) Well done friend :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh! Thank you so much I have no words to express how happy I am. You have understood the exact meaning I wanted to
convey :)

[Skib]

You are more than welcome :)

[Manu]

Amazing One, Saher :-) :-)
By the way even I was thinking to write one poem using like a seashell line But you are very quick to write this..here I am still thinking.
I will send you RR when I will post my one :-)
This is really good and true to the meaning.The seashell's perspective is very nicely presented here.
I loved this write.
keep up the good work, Saher.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much I really want to read your poem on that line. Eagerly waiting ☺

[Manu]

Yeah, It will take some time...But I will inform you.

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay All the best. :)

[Manu]

Haha..Thank you :-)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Wonderful message derived with it...well conveyed superbly written...thank you for sharing this one's such a lovely work..keep it up and keep sharing..i always enjoy your work😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. It's good to hear that :)

[Sikandar Khan]

Nice Your Every Writng Is In Simple Words And Describe CLealry The Theme You HAve Magic To Express Deep Feelings Into Simple Words You ARe One Of The Writers HEre WHich Wriitngs I Enjoy Due To Simple ANd Easily Describing Style ...You HAve Clearly Explains The Feelings Of Being UnNoticed...

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) I feel so happy and honoured.

[Sikandar Khan]

Wellcome.............