Only rain can understand my pain

For all those who love rain

ONLY RAIN CAN UNDERSTAND MY PAIN

Why does it feel like it is going to rain?

Does sky too feel my pain?

The thunders will be my rage,

I have to shut my heart in a cage.

So that it doesn't feel a thing,

I am fed up being nothing.

These murky clouds depict my state of mind,

They are blurry and so they are of my kind.

When the clouds couldn't hold the rain, 

I would be overwhelmed thinking rain understands my pain.

Rain pours from the sky like my tears,

My mind couldn't hold my biggest fears.

That's how I have fallen,

That's why I love rains.

I can feel the sadness crawling,

Only rain can understand my pain.

Reviews

[Stan Lee]

Heaps of emotion. Well done here. :) Good rhyming too

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your visit. I appreciate it. ☺

[Zoya]

This is a great concept and I can see that you've written your heart out. I enjoyed reading the poem!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am feeling really hapoy. ☺

[Zoya]

You're welcome :)

[Sikandar Khan]

This Poems Describes Also My Situation When I Cry.......

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad that this poem was relatable. Thank you so much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend with the logic of your words.
"That's how I have fallen,
That's why I love rains.
I can feel the sadness crawling,
Only rain can understand my pain."
Rain make the pain seem okay. Hiding tears and sad face. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much I am feeling very happy to know that you liked it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome.

[CAPOLAVORO]

I so love this one. Rainy season is my most favorite. You are so true in every words you've written all the way through out. Indeed, there is something in the rain that it and only it can understand our pain. Two thumbs up!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Even I love rain I become so happy when it rains it is a natural mood healer. I love that petrichor smell. ♡

[Abraham George]

Pain and rain are good theme and comparison. Nicely penned and those rhymes are good

keep doing my friend

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) I am glad to know that you liked it.

[Surya]

Nature always supports humble beings, your sad poem here is penned well with good comparisions...

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) Feeling really happy to know that you liked it.

[Surya]

Itna happy anyway you r welcome..

[Surya]

Itna happy anyway you r welcome..

[wordman]

your heart can feel the rain ,you know the pain is coming

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are correct. Thank you so much :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good rhyming very good theme lovely poem beautiful words in it

Why does it feel like it is going to rain?

Does sky too feel my pain?

The thunders will be my rage,

I have to shut my heart in a cage.
Great lines above. I loved the poem.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am feeling so solaced that you liked what I write. I truly appreciate and thank you from bottom of my heart.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Ur welcome