Just tell me

JUST TELL ME 

Did you come across those days,

When you feel low for no reason?

When every little noise hurts you,

And laughter causes you irritation.

Do you feel such?

When you get really annoyed on everyone,

And every little thing they do, hurts you so much.

Tell me I am not the only one who feels this way,

Tell me sometimes it is fine not to feel okay.

Even the silence bothers the same way like noise,

I feel no difference in sadness and joy,

Every feeling in me faded away,

Time heals everything they say.

When will that time come?

Days are turning to years,

I am still in that same place,

There is no one to wipe my tears.

Tell me it is okay to feel like this,

Tell me I am not the only one.

Tell me that you feel the same,

Tell me I am not the one to blame. 

Reviews

[Abraham George]

So depressed?
There is no one to wipe my tears.
please remember the words i told you that i have two hands to...........and shoulders...........

i just intentionally avoided some words .I think you will understand . i wish our secret should be stay with in us.

i feel sad about your situation you going through.
Please try to find happiness in everything even in hard times

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes....I understand your words. Yep that's the only way to be happy to find hidden happiness in everything that I do.☺ Thank you so much.

[Darren K. Jackson]

What a great way to express feeling. I often feel these things in my own life. I think it is why God has inspired me to write so that when others read it, that it may help them in what they are going through. Keep bringing the reality in all that you write.

[Najam Us Saher]

I feel the same. Thank you so much. ☺

[AshlynnStyx]

Its another poem where you've captured the heart of a broken person. Its clean and flows very well.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much ☺

[Giulia King]

"Time heals everything they say.
When will that time come?" I wonder that too. And no, even if this is just your imagination and maybe you're not feeling this way. I still say, you're not the only one feeling like this.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes....I do feel mostly like this. Thank you so much for your solacing words. I appreciate it

[Giulia King]

Whatever it is, it will pass. I wish I knew when because we're just waiting for the clock to tick a bit faster. You're not alone.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes....Thank you so much ☺

[Joey Nizz]

Private thoughts, we all have them some are the same, thanks sharing your thoughts with us :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it ☺

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome :)
I wrote something simular but i put it in the trash wasnt too convinced of my work on it, i thought of going back to it some time in the future but no need anymore since i read yours, thanks for sharing this with me! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

☺ You're welcome

[Stacy Purvis]

Private thoughts, perhaps guilt-laden.
Touched my heart, so. Thank you so much for sharing. x

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much. ☺

[Anjali]

It is ok to feel like that. I also feel like this, a lot. What a sad and beautiful write! Keep it up!😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. ☺

[Wajiha Nayeem]

i have no words to this wonderful breathtaking poetry...

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it. ☺

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure;)

[CAPOLAVORO]

"Tell me I am not the only one.
Tell me that you feel the same,
Tell me I am not the one to blame. "

That feeling when you just want a sense of universality in the world so that it would give you comfort somehow. Perfect!

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you have understood the exact meaning I wanted to convey. Thank you so much ☺

[wordman]

a touch of depression,it will slowly eat you up
we all feel this way from time to time

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes....Thank you so much sir. ☺