A blank letter

Expressing feelings

A BLANK LETTER

Sitting opposite to each other,

They sat together,

He held a letter in his hand,

They didn't know where their story would land.

She was eager to read the letter,

She was excited,

To see what that letter held,

He sat there patiently,

Adoring the beauty she beholds.

He gave the letter to her,

And ended her curiosity,

She was shocked to find,

There was nothing she could see.

In a surprise she looked at him,

And he replied, 'That's my life without you'

She was amazed and happy,

Her feelings she couldn't control,

Seeing her happy he was consoled.

'My life is a blank letter without you,

I want to fill the days together,

Whenever you are not around that's how I feel without you,

You are my sunshine in the dark weather.

You are my words, my feelings, 

Oh! Darling you are my poetry.

Whenever I meet you, 

You blind me with your beauty,

And leave me speechless

Creating a cause to leave the letter empty'

She smiled, she shed a tear,

She preserved the letter forever,

She engraved his words in her heart,

She wished they never get apart. 

Reviews

[Surya]

Bless them, it's a beauty seen through heart, hope you got me, no more words.....:)..

[Najam Us Saher]

Yss....Thank you so much ☺

[Surya]

You are welcome...:)

[Krutika]

The context and the lines that go with it are just what is needed.. Simple yet heartfelt. I liked it. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind visit. I appreciate it ☺

[Abraham George]

Thanks for giving me a nice way to propose a girl. So romantic and i like this innovative way to propose

really appreciable, and i hope that the way he propose you.

[Najam Us Saher]

Hahaha......Thank you so much ☺

[wordman]

a sweet love story,i am nothing without you
loved the blank piece of paper theme

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much sir ☺

[Sonakshi Arora]

Amazing creativity and writing skills! I loved it :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much ☺

[Anjali]

Awww.... It's so sweet!! I like the line where the guy says that my life is a blank page without you. You used a really good metaphor, here. Really loved it.👌

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Feeling widely elated to know that you liked it. ☺

[Anjali]

Your poems are awesome, they deserve more attention. 😀

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I lack words for my gratitude. ☺

[Farhan Shaikh]

Umm, such an amazing poetry, you are at romantic poems, this one is lovely and the comparison of that blank letter is awesome..well penned

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Feeling truly happy to know that you liked it ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

My friend. A amazing poem.
"You are my sunshine in the dark weather.
You are my words, my feelings,
Oh! Darling you are my poetry."
The above lines are perfect. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much Sir. I appreciate it ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Interesting and quite romantic. I liked the comparison you made of the blank letter with that of the absence of a person in your life.. makes me wonder if this happens in real life...

I liked reading this. Well penned :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it. I'll just correct it. ☺

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! A pleasure always :)