I lift my pen and write again

I wrote about us

I LIFT MY PEN AND WRITE AGAIN

Hiding my emotions under a smile, in vain.

You disappeared from my life, leaving me plain.

I cannot elucidate my feelings, I am in pain.

I want to lift my pen and write again. 

You were my sunshine like a glow,

You were like warmth, in winter snow,

Your love and concern, I cannot forgo,

I am tired hiding my pain, tears flow.

You were what I wrote about,

You and your love I couldn't doubt,

All alone by myself; Got nothing to lose or gain,

Once again, stranded alone in your thoughts

I lift my pen and write again. 

I let myself loose now, 

I am living in this torment, only I know how.

Separated myself from others, my emotions  are supressed,

I want to spend an entire life with you, 

That's my only request.

I wait to be happy; to let my emotions drain,

I cry tears and with a smile

I lift my pen and write again. 

Reviews

[ashish hajagulkar]

good way explanation of write something and expressed in writer's point of view

[Najam Us Saher]

I am happy to know that you liked this.
Thank you very much.

[Zephyr]

This is very emotional and well expressed.
I loved the very theme of writing out our feelings.'Good poem Najam:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Your words made me really happy. ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

Writing need great joy and sadness.
"I cry tears and with a smile
I lift my pen and write again. "
I understand the poem and I do understand the above lines. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

I am really very happy to know that you liked this, thank you very much.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome.

[Ardra]

Nicely expressed....writing helps in letting out the emotions...so keep writing let the emotions flow :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah, correct. Thank you very much for reading this ☺

[Sandipta$]

Separated myself from others n i wait to be hpy.... Well done... Motivating thought

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. ☺

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I couldn't really understand the rhyming sequence of this piece. In the starting eight lines you carry out the rhyme okay (though it did seem forced to me) but then it turned kinda jarring near the end and reads somehow freeverse to me...
Regarding the subject of this poem, I'll say it's nicely expressed in terms of feelings.

If you're interested you should check this blog of the WC poet Richard's.

http://www.writerscafe.org/RichardJ/blogs/ON-BREAKING-GRAMMAR-RULES-IN-POETRY-WRITING/131273/

I found this extremely helpful and his other blogs too. Hopefully you will too :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I noticed that too...I will work on it. Thank you so much for reading and sharing me that link. I appreciate it ☺

[Najam Us Saher]

Does it sound better now ?

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome. :)

[Priyanshi]

let tears flow and again hold the pen and write again....great poem,I loved it.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading. I appreciate it. ☺

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[wordman]

i guess we all experience pain,love is a two edged sword

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right. Thank you very much.

[Mr.Writer]

Such a well written and rhymeful poem Najam!
I really enjoyed and loved how you expressed the emotions in an engaging way by rhyming!
Well done, keep it up!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. I am really happy to know that you liked it :)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[Jiya]

Simply beautiful!
I have no words for this writing.
The rhyme scheme too is superb!
BRAVO!

[Najam Us Saher]

You made me really happy. Thank you so much :)