All over again

ALL OVER AGAIN 

Another time, another heartbreak;

I feel I deserve it all.

I chose to be with you for your sake,

You made me up, you brought me to a fall.

You simply vanished from my life,

You rose me up, you broke me down.

Across the fields, like a river

I wanted to stay with you forever.

You sank me down, drowned me till I shivered.

It feels so cold; I've to be bold

Till I recover. 

All over it happened,

All over yet again.

You showed me life,

A perfect one, with you and me together.

You brought a smile, left me to feel pain forever.

My nature all sulky, my life so sombre,

You made me believe I was good

Then you decided to leave

I feel so high in pain,

My head is up in shame

Knowing I was foolish again.

I feel deceived by my deeds,

Which I thought it wouldn't be forgotten.

You built me up, you broke me down 

Like I was a playing tower. 

Across the seas, like a gentle breeze,

I wanted to stay with you forever.

Held by the things you told me,

Broken down by your audacity,

For me, you were the one,

Whom I trusted with my life,

Never knew you would let me down,

When I felt like a flying kite. 

Reviews

[Avia]

All over again. Heartbreak, pain, loneliness. Wonderful highs, depressing lows. Nicely written. Well done

[Najam Us Saher]

While I was writing this I thought that you could understand and relate to this. Thank you so much for reading.

[Avia]

I really do. After a lot of thinking, i've decided it's best not to contemplate on it and what happened, moving on is what's important. It's always a pleasure to read your work :)

[anonymous_at]

great poem.....'cause of love and crave....we tend to repeat the same mistake again with same person...but the end of the day ....we have to either become stronger or start to learn the lesson.....and i really liked it the way you did the comparison of the emotions ......

[Najam Us Saher]

I agree with you. Thank you very much for reading. It means a lot :)

[anonymous_at]

You are welcome.....it was indeed great read....:)

[Abraham George]

About poem:- its good as always and the emotions are the conveyed well

I really feel sad for what your are going through. Please recover from your emotions. Break your bowl and come out my dear fish. You are a golden fish and your shouldn't be in that small Bowl of Love. Please break and come out to the world and find more love .


Thanks for sharing this piece of work.

[Najam Us Saher]

I was really thinking how you would review after reading this. I am fine but I sometimes feel that I am very foolish. Thank you very much for such kind words and review. I will one day break the bowl and live brightly. ☺

[Abraham George]

you are not foolish . nobody is perfect in this world. mistakes happens.
be Bold and live brightly my dearest.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Certainly not a nice feeling when that happens but kinda what life is like - you gotta move on or you get stuck ...
Well conveyed emotions.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah you are right. Sadness, past, emotions are like a swamp it pulls you deep when you stand for long.
Your words made me write a nice line. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome. Always a pleasure reading you 😊

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very well conveyed it another masterpiece from you.. lovely

[Najam Us Saher]

I am happy that you consider it as one of my masterpiece. It means a lot 😀

[lostinthewaves]

beautiful, and all too real

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. :)

[Mavericks]

Well, may be that guy still loves you. I have been there. One of them. I loved her, she loved me. But, sometimes Life don't just let you go. Long Distance relationships, you know. I still Love her, but let's see where it goes.
"Let it all go, see what stays!''.

[Najam Us Saher]

Sometimes there is no way to be together you know, thank you very much for reading my poems. It means a lot for me. ☺

[Mavericks]

Thank you for your kind words. I normally don't review much but your works speak to one's heart. And being an Empath i can feel the depth of your emotions. Keep up the good work!
Wound is the place where the Light enters you. - Rumi.

[Gabby The GAB]

Great poem
= good read! :D

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad journey shared in your words. When we loved deeply and the love isn't returned. Our heart will suffer. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right, that really hurts. Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.

[Matthew Kult]

brokenly ghosted

Sad but great read

Matthew

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for stooping by. It really means a lot. Thank you :)

[Matthew Kult]

You are welcome

Matthew