Christmas Haiku

CHRISTMAS HAIKU 

Shiny silver balls

Hung amidst golden ones on 

A huge christmas tree 

Gifts of all sizes 

Lay below the christmas tree 

Beside the fireplace

Children excited 

Happiness spread all over

Wow! it is christmas 

Reviews

[grayscale]

3 haiku phrased in tandem, very interesting idea, pretty cool.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for appreciating this, it means a lot.

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem shared. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I wish you and family a safe and wonderful holiday.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much, I wish you and your family the same. 😀

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my good friend.

[Project022]

Short but it has so much meaning in it. Beautifully done..! I really enjoyed it ^^

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for creating the contest, I met a wonderful person and a writer too :)

[Project022]

The same back at you. I meant one of my favorite writers and they are also an amazing person. Thank you so much for entering my contests ^^

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you for creating them 😊

[Farhan Shaikh]

Nicely penned, enjoyed totally....

[Najam Us Saher]

I am really glad to know that you liked it :)

[Priyanshi]

Beautiful haikus..spreading happiness in every heart.
Loved them.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading, I am happy that you liked it :)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure dear.

[Zoya]

As vibrant as the festival itself! Nicely done :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much, I am glad to know that you liked it :)

[Zoya]

you're welcome!,

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

There's a good vibe in this short poem

[Najam Us Saher]

I am happy that you could feel it, thank you very much :)

[Suhd]

A nice and warm feeling in this!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[Damion]

i love the last part "WOW! its christmas.lol

[Najam Us Saher]

Hey, thank you very much :D

[Damion]

anytime ill help u if u need it

[Sofia]

Triple haiku! It really sets in a picture of the merry season of Christmas.
It's lovely and I appreciate your talent to write three haikus as one poem. Thanks for sharing! Keep writing :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much, I feel honoured to hear that 😀