Only for once

ONLY FOR ONCE

Only for once if I could forget my sorrow,

I would want to live in joy not caring about tomorrow.

Only for once, I want to dance and cry tears of happiness,

I want to end the choking venom of sadness.

Only for once, I want to feel what it feels like to be care free,

I want to burst the bubble of grief and want to be the real me.

Only for once, I want my inner self to feel pretty, 

 I want to end the feelings of being guilty.

Only for once, I would want to live life without regrets,

I want to live every day without being upset. 

Only for once, I want to forget my every trouble,

I want to bury my strife and end my struggle.

2 January 2018.

Reviews

[Raghib]

Only for once you think of killing the demon inside,
But where do you start from ?
For you may never know,
This could be your only one chance.

I couldnt help but notice the date.
Was it to remind yourself that you felt something like this once? You fear that you will forget this feeling and be handcuffed by sorrow.
I think !

[Najam Us Saher]

Your thoughts are poetic, great review. Thank you so much.

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

All we need is just that one chance. Beautifully written as always

[Najam Us Saher]

Absolutely correct, I have your story in my reading list I am not free now a days, busy in college assignments, once I am free I will read it.
Thank you for this review :)

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

You are welcome

[Farhan Shaikh]

very well expressed saher...loved it

[Najam Us Saher]

I feel this is a wish of those who feels this way.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poems.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Well I think you are forgetting something?

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah, not to mention thanks, but I couldn't resist not mentioning it.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Only for once- there’s a first time for everything take that step set yourself free🌹

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Silence the mind open the heart and let life be- love of self calms many fears- you are perfect beautiful and loved just the way you are- deep emotions make us realise that sometimes we have life easy but never stop believing in yourself and don’t take others negativity into your heart protect your heart always- deep thoughts and words enjoyed reading- hope all is well🌹

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes everything is good, I feel warm by your concern towards me. Thank you so much for your kind & wise words :)

[zaisham9393]

We all feel this way sometimes!I loved your poem!

[Najam Us Saher]

I am extremely happy to hear that. Thank you so much :)

[Mavericks]

Very Introspective piece. Being an Empath i can feel what you wanna convey here. This is Life. And, when you are walking in your own Truth, it becomes like walking on a double edged sword. Plus, being a Scorpio, i bet, we are very intense folks. Every emotion is etched very deep in our mind. It's hard to let go. But, it's a blessing in disguise. It's meant to transform you. And, i think you are already on your way as i feel while reading your works. Keep it up. You have a long way to go!

[Najam Us Saher]

Indeed, my struggles shaped me into a person I am today and that lead to blessings.
Thank you so much for reading this poem and writing your views, It feels like you have really emphatised with my emotions in this one.

[wordman]

don`t we all,life can be such a b***h,why.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah, thank you so much for reading.

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Mikku]

Wish it were that easy to look beyond the oceans of grief...very well written ... Loved it

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah only if it was, thank you very much for reading :)

[¿]

It's like all wishes are in a compact and I loved the way it was described. And maybe it's true all wishes to live like this without wanting twice but only for once!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for sharing your views.

[¿]

Actually cartload thanks to you for bringing your wishes in front of the world in such a great way. May Allah shower you blessings and help you fulfil your desires. TC
- Tahsin. Z

[Najam Us Saher]

Ameen, May Allah bless you too. ☺