fade

the voices 

 they will mot fade 

but my mind 

goes by like a flash of lightning 

one second hear 

the next poof 

so what do we make of this?

my fading sanity and growing distress 

do we make ¨your normal phase¨?

this not a phase the voices told me them selves 

they say I don`t belong 

so tell me, did you go trough this ¨phase¨ as well 

the voices are all grown up now 

i afraid i wont last for long 

my mind is being pulled 

i´m fighting a war against myself 

and some how i´m loosing 

i´m fading 

  i´m gone 

  

     

  

      

Reviews

[Sapientiam]

I think the best things I love about a character is their internal struggles, and you've portrayed that beautifully. The parts where you talk about the phase resonated with this war, as it shows the person being morphed by the voices. They consume so much of the person's sanity that they just disappear, losing their sense of self. Great job with this!

[Queen]

thank chu~

[APOORVA]

how deep and touching.
you writing touches the heart
keep up

[Queen]

Thank chu~