Nature Relates.

Nature Relates.

The sky clouded over and down came the rain,

Nature itself was crying like it knew my pain,

The violent wind howled through the trees,

The force of my anger bought me to my knees,

The calm before the storm was gone, it was the past, 

Somewhere inside my heart I knew my rage couldn't last.

I must pretend not to be angry, not to hate, 

Else I might force my death to come late.

I knew that, as all things must, it would die, 

Until that moment I must continue to live a lie.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Such powerful emotion in this short poem. I like the use of Nature to strengthen the feel and the emotion of this poem. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Lina Grey]

Very vivid imagery and sensory details. I loved it. Thank you.

[katyj]

Totally loved this one, amazing last two lines. Loved the rhyme scheme and flow as well. Amazing write!