Lonely here

Lonely here

A Poem by Nancy

My heart 
Bleeds with every
Tear that falls 

My hand
Shakes 
but there is 
No one to hold it steady

Its lonely here 
Waiting 
For you to come back

Pleading 
With my soul
Please come home.

© 2010 Nancy


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u expressed the heart and soul loneliness so well-Great poem!


Posted 13 Years Ago


Besides love, lonliness is a powerful feeling that inflicts itself who loves and wants to be loved. Sometimes we are blessed with being loved, yet many times we are always in want. As Coyote mentioned, a powerful and execellent poem. Again Good Job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know this feeling. Alone and trying to find purpose to move on. A powerful poem. You said a lot in so few words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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