The Dreams Visit

The Dreams Visit

A Poem by Alicia™
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The dreams never fail to visit me

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The dreams never fail to visit me
Each time something strikes the place
Where you once were.

I wait in the night each time,
Daring not fall asleep,
Knowing that my heart shall be shattered
When I awake in the morn.

Only when I have no control does it happen;
The dreams playing with freedom in my mind
When my sub-conscious is let loose while I’m asleep.
Always, my heart feels like lead in the morn.
Always, my sub-conscious betrays me.

The dreams never fail to visit me
Each time something strikes the place
Where you once were.

© 2010 Alicia™


Author's Note

Alicia™
Every time something very related to a certain someone happens, I'll dream about this person. Every single time. I didn't really do much editing to this one…

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Your writing is very good!!!


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome poem.
thanks for sharing.

your very good at writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dreams keep the emotions alive my friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I could feel the presence come that seems to haunt the shadows of your dreams... Your words convey the depth of what once was... lingering still deep within.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful poem. Dreams can tell us many things.......Everything could happen in it. Most dream has a delighted ending, but you awoke fill with loniness and sadness. Also, I like the complete of your poem. I had dreams like yours too, I often dream of person/people I saw that day, most of them are my schoolmates, teachers, friends, families.......I also adore the words you used here for you description. The flow and story are fabulous! An excellent poem of yours!

Posted 8 Years Ago


We so often visit those who for what ever reason have left us, we need to fill that empty space somehow, and deep inside we know this, so our dreams fulfill that which our waking hours cannot........A really sweet and tender poem even if a little sad

Posted 8 Years Ago


Amazing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Loved it. It almost seems as though the dreamer is too afraid to slumber in fear of losing what they are about to recieve.
The flow was nice, calming, serene.
Absolutely loved it. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful...dreams can tell us a lot...this flowed wonderful and with ease...nice work...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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The blessings and curses of dreams.
Amazing poem.


Posted 8 Years Ago



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