Flight

Flight

A Poem by +Naomi+
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Feathery black wings wet with morning dew,
soft pale lips pressed upon my own.
Don't go back to their world, darling.
Don't.
Stay upon this unforgiving planet,
I don't care if it's a sin.
Your flight pattern is so unpredictable.
I don't even know if you'll stay.
Fallen Angel...
Don't go.
Don't run.
Don't fly...




***Another shape poem.
In shape of a skull :P

© 2011 +Naomi+


Author's Note

+Naomi+
Stupid Stupid Stupid >.<
It's late. Be nice.

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that poem is definitely NOT stupid. i loved it. I am still waiting for a fallen angel to find me.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Not stupid at all:] It's very sweet and cute.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Pierced and flows incorrectly, good try though

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the poem. A darkness with a very interesting story. Fallen Angels are many in this world. Sometime must follow to know the pain. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


its soo awesome, I love this!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was amazing. I could relate a lot to it.
The format you used to make it a skull was really cool.
Wonderful write :) 100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


Believe me, this isn't stupid at all. I loved it!! :) I really like the idea... falling in love with a fallen angel.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This isn't stupid! And it's also not late XD but this is beautiful Naomi (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


not stupid! i loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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+Naomi+
+Naomi+

Chicago, IL



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